Stark Naked Eyes

Stark
Naked
Eyes wide shut
Screamed
First cry
First breathe

Didn't cry
Didn't sleep
Watched all night
Pixie face
Full of promise
Enthralled

First pang
Hunger
Alien sensation
Sucked milk
From breast
Heart palpitated

Unseeing
Yet eyes wandered
Light
Alien world
Full of wonder
Wonderful

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